tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post4619098681274566442..comments2023-07-21T07:38:15.376-04:00Comments on Whimsical Quests of a Curious Mind: Snowflakes & Beeswax #WeWriWa snippet 10/13/13Jess Schirahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-48766614610981361142013-10-19T18:00:50.017-04:002013-10-19T18:00:50.017-04:00A touching snippet there.
A touching snippet there.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-47955647798672739332013-10-17T18:36:25.079-04:002013-10-17T18:36:25.079-04:00Ha Jess, you're just like me. Still hopping ar...Ha Jess, you're just like me. Still hopping around the list mid week. :) Great scene. You always do a good job with the setting. I sometimes have problems with scenery. Weird huh?HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-36412862781463484452013-10-15T23:34:44.110-04:002013-10-15T23:34:44.110-04:00It's nice to see that he is acting on his feel...It's nice to see that he is acting on his feelings. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-73407354798506127622013-10-14T10:07:15.408-04:002013-10-14T10:07:15.408-04:00Beautiful word picture you've painted here. I ...Beautiful word picture you've painted here. I want her to know he was there! Great 8 :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-44887650384654235172013-10-13T23:22:35.011-04:002013-10-13T23:22:35.011-04:00Sounds like he's got it bad for her. Good snip...Sounds like he's got it bad for her. Good snippet, Jess. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-69947602986848809312013-10-13T19:30:44.519-04:002013-10-13T19:30:44.519-04:00Very poignant. His thoughts really showed his emot...Very poignant. His thoughts really showed his emotions.Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-88320334604681790002013-10-13T17:12:18.046-04:002013-10-13T17:12:18.046-04:00Lovely excerpt, I loved the last line! Lovely excerpt, I loved the last line! Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-25475012413753984592013-10-13T16:05:00.311-04:002013-10-13T16:05:00.311-04:00Oh good, I love this story and I'm so glad he&...Oh good, I love this story and I'm so glad he's feeling protective of her! Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-55546943170983879442013-10-13T15:58:29.975-04:002013-10-13T15:58:29.975-04:00Lovely descriptions, and nice evocation of his fee...Lovely descriptions, and nice evocation of his feelings.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-17772246332482014632013-10-13T15:13:15.099-04:002013-10-13T15:13:15.099-04:00I love how worried he is. great jobI love how worried he is. great jobAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13164269285285491186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-6731903517642290632013-10-13T15:07:05.281-04:002013-10-13T15:07:05.281-04:00What a lovely, pastoral scene. Beautifully written...What a lovely, pastoral scene. Beautifully written!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-31458985959819000822013-10-13T14:48:01.949-04:002013-10-13T14:48:01.949-04:00Oliver is so adorable with his plans for a casual ...Oliver is so adorable with his plans for a casual cup of tea! Very sweet eight. :)<br /><br />(I completely forgot to sign up for WeWriWa, but my post is up, anyway, if you have the time)<br /><br />Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-10846190701683227982013-10-13T11:50:18.962-04:002013-10-13T11:50:18.962-04:00Beautiful job! I love the language here, it's ...Beautiful job! I love the language here, it's just lovely to read and makes me want to read more.Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07986129906420811246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-8029769582213029092013-10-13T11:18:47.205-04:002013-10-13T11:18:47.205-04:00What beautiful prose! Fantastic description and la...What beautiful prose! Fantastic description and language, Jess, I love this!Daezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-14756989457876319252013-10-13T10:55:35.812-04:002013-10-13T10:55:35.812-04:00Hi Jess :) Nitpicky me again :) If it's cold e...Hi Jess :) Nitpicky me again :) If it's cold enough to snow and it's mid-afternoon, sunset is probably not very far off. You probably would have caught that but my inner editor insisted I mention it :)<br /><br />I agree with Karen, definitely evocative. I love that he >noticed< his feeling that something wasn't right, and that he acted on it. I really like that guy! <br /><br />Hey are you doing NaNo this year? I'm going to jump in for the first time :DOwlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-48392558947055086402013-10-13T10:27:20.094-04:002013-10-13T10:27:20.094-04:00You paint such a beautiful scene here - very evoca...You paint such a beautiful scene here - very evocative and sweet. Well done.Karen de Langehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976578068443326404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-40208821979117016942013-10-13T08:25:43.894-04:002013-10-13T08:25:43.894-04:00Hmmm...I wonder what the chances are that he actua...Hmmm...I wonder what the chances are that he actually spends the night at an inn? <br /><br />Kudos!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-43180134405490562942013-10-13T07:49:17.646-04:002013-10-13T07:49:17.646-04:00Very nicely done 8. Lovely description and nicely ...Very nicely done 8. Lovely description and nicely showing Oliver's "need" to se her again. Good job.Susan Stuckeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14742093200745409339noreply@blogger.com