tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post7032779729152426920..comments2023-07-21T07:38:15.376-04:00Comments on Whimsical Quests of a Curious Mind: Rendezvous with Destiny #WeWriWa Snippet 2/22/15Jess Schirahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-32282352777855655852015-02-24T15:23:11.097-05:002015-02-24T15:23:11.097-05:00Wow! You managed to really make us feel the emotio...Wow! You managed to really make us feel the emotional punch in the gut in very few lines. Nice choices of details.Aheilahttp://thewriteaholicblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-61747722024226444192015-02-24T00:54:47.257-05:002015-02-24T00:54:47.257-05:00Great tension felt in this snippet. Good job.Great tension felt in this snippet. Good job.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-78925666216427262272015-02-23T11:06:55.183-05:002015-02-23T11:06:55.183-05:00The little details - like chocolate chip cookies a...The little details - like chocolate chip cookies add so much to the confusion - great 8.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00859109777005545304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-9009037021017725702015-02-23T09:39:10.567-05:002015-02-23T09:39:10.567-05:00That would surely be shocking news. Great snippet....That would surely be shocking news. Great snippet.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-69728081922737308992015-02-23T06:00:53.482-05:002015-02-23T06:00:53.482-05:00Thanks! It turns out I get bored writing straight ...Thanks! It turns out I get bored writing straight romances. I'm glad you like the twist!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-48500224350702170322015-02-23T05:54:58.288-05:002015-02-23T05:54:58.288-05:00Well said! I'm also a big fan of people making...Well said! I'm also a big fan of people making the wrong choices for the right reasons.Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-70789795927694404362015-02-23T05:52:28.867-05:002015-02-23T05:52:28.867-05:00Thanks Veronica! Strong praise indeed!Thanks Veronica! Strong praise indeed!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-29957274783983144772015-02-22T20:51:31.512-05:002015-02-22T20:51:31.512-05:00Very strong turning point, Jess!Very strong turning point, Jess!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-47023837172954117802015-02-22T17:08:13.932-05:002015-02-22T17:08:13.932-05:00I'm with Veronica---this is a twist all right!...I'm with Veronica---this is a twist all right! And I'm hooked aready! :)Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-40668550203696991632015-02-22T16:37:51.259-05:002015-02-22T16:37:51.259-05:00Well that's certainly an interesting twist! I ...Well that's certainly an interesting twist! I hope for his sake the story is wrong...you got me all wrapped up in the story in just a few sentences - great 8!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-405274667974385862015-02-22T16:19:05.290-05:002015-02-22T16:19:05.290-05:00Sometimes nice people do terrible things... or ter...Sometimes nice people do terrible things... or terrible people are good at pretending to be nice. But I hope for the sake of his broken heart that it's a mistake.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-29579118753669394072015-02-22T16:07:41.702-05:002015-02-22T16:07:41.702-05:00Great details and emotion. Eager to read more!Great details and emotion. Eager to read more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-91262665019426550462015-02-22T15:41:12.611-05:002015-02-22T15:41:12.611-05:00Ooh nice eight. A spy. I kind of like that.Ooh nice eight. A spy. I kind of like that.Nevahttp://www.nevasquiresrodriguez.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-58685769254377746912015-02-22T15:25:39.043-05:002015-02-22T15:25:39.043-05:00Perhaps her name makes them think so. I hope not i...Perhaps her name makes them think so. I hope not if he's so attached to her. Nice reaction for Theo.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-88271687840742790752015-02-22T13:04:58.269-05:002015-02-22T13:04:58.269-05:00Thanks Marcia!Thanks Marcia!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-84506396973985506392015-02-22T13:01:42.629-05:002015-02-22T13:01:42.629-05:00Thanks Gem! I hope you like it!Thanks Gem! I hope you like it!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-69912213362184990022015-02-22T12:56:58.805-05:002015-02-22T12:56:58.805-05:00Thanks Charmaine! Thanks Charmaine! Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-65882429936765759412015-02-22T12:44:10.251-05:002015-02-22T12:44:10.251-05:00Awww, thank you Kate. You're such a sweetie!Awww, thank you Kate. You're such a sweetie!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-30364539511465674282015-02-22T12:41:24.660-05:002015-02-22T12:41:24.660-05:00Wow! I'd be shocked too. I'm hoping she&...Wow! I'd be shocked too. I'm hoping she's not really a spy, for Theo's sake at least. Great eight, Jess. The details about cookies and how she took care of him underscore his shock beautifully!Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-87181415282462288082015-02-22T12:29:37.651-05:002015-02-22T12:29:37.651-05:00Oh no! Poor Theo. Lots of info, lots of tension. G...Oh no! Poor Theo. Lots of info, lots of tension. Great job!Karyn Goodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07137027268568162257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-11044501605923934882015-02-22T11:41:35.623-05:002015-02-22T11:41:35.623-05:00Shocking eight. How much can a person stand.? Wond...Shocking eight. How much can a person stand.? Wonderful snippet.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-58736551465175562922015-02-22T10:47:59.077-05:002015-02-22T10:47:59.077-05:00Lots of tension in this scene. Just got mycopy. Lots of tension in this scene. Just got mycopy. Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-7747109487201477432015-02-22T10:44:20.323-05:002015-02-22T10:44:20.323-05:00Oh boy...your own mom a spy? For the enemy? Yike...Oh boy...your own mom a spy? For the enemy? Yikes! Say it ain't so Jess!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-7091170071577122332015-02-22T10:25:49.879-05:002015-02-22T10:25:49.879-05:00I like this a lot! Just enough of his thoughts so ...I like this a lot! Just enough of his thoughts so we really get the impact on him. I need to get on the ball and read this whole story :-) Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-24760280169791404042015-02-22T04:18:01.716-05:002015-02-22T04:18:01.716-05:00Thank you :)Thank you :)Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.com