tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post7134343606019220871..comments2023-07-21T07:38:15.376-04:00Comments on Whimsical Quests of a Curious Mind: Introducing Madelyn #WeWriWa Snippet for August 11, 2013Jess Schirahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-64022694299573638842013-08-11T20:18:14.983-04:002013-08-11T20:18:14.983-04:00First off, I love the title of your story! This wa...First off, I love the title of your story! This was a terrific excerpt that hooked me right away. Well-written and great description throughout. :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13436620421781059000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-38502631790702618222013-08-11T18:49:51.989-04:002013-08-11T18:49:51.989-04:00Loved that Jess, i can feel her resentment and her...Loved that Jess, i can feel her resentment and her longing for everything to be as it was.gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-9360587741358455862013-08-11T16:17:08.513-04:002013-08-11T16:17:08.513-04:00Ha! I know just how she feels. Great snippet!Ha! I know just how she feels. Great snippet!A.S. Fenichelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188528705441184803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-43114419367120965022013-08-11T16:12:10.622-04:002013-08-11T16:12:10.622-04:00Great emotion there.Great emotion there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-86384829739065311392013-08-11T14:08:40.844-04:002013-08-11T14:08:40.844-04:00I take it Jack is a dog?I take it Jack is a dog?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-77133903633490263502013-08-11T13:08:00.083-04:002013-08-11T13:08:00.083-04:00great snippet! I really like how your deep pov got...great snippet! I really like how your deep pov got me into the story and how I felt I was in her head and feeling what she was feeling.Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07986129906420811246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-85015128088039959552013-08-11T12:31:03.220-04:002013-08-11T12:31:03.220-04:00As everyone else said - great emotional character ...As everyone else said - great emotional character reveal - does make the reader want to hug her and stand beside her. Nicely done!!Susan Stuckeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14742093200745409339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-50900607865680229702013-08-11T12:21:37.991-04:002013-08-11T12:21:37.991-04:00Terrific emotion in this. I'm wondering what m...Terrific emotion in this. I'm wondering what makes her so skittish. I know how she feels, though. Terrific snippet!Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-18133997258979040262013-08-11T12:20:20.906-04:002013-08-11T12:20:20.906-04:00Excellent emotional snippet!Excellent emotional snippet!Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-86046806398688633362013-08-11T12:16:46.603-04:002013-08-11T12:16:46.603-04:00Aww, I want to give her a hug. You described her e...Aww, I want to give her a hug. You described her emotions very well - excellent excerpt.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-49844708412274327592013-08-11T11:33:59.526-04:002013-08-11T11:33:59.526-04:00Oh gosh, I feel her anguish. Poor thing. Great j...Oh gosh, I feel her anguish. Poor thing. Great job dragging me in and making me care for her instantly! Excellent eight!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-52949103776357952072013-08-11T11:18:28.832-04:002013-08-11T11:18:28.832-04:00A wonderful look at what makes her tick. Great sni...A wonderful look at what makes her tick. Great snippet!Karen de Langehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976578068443326404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-59608569547937420402013-08-11T11:07:34.264-04:002013-08-11T11:07:34.264-04:00Agree with all of the above! Great character stud...Agree with all of the above! Great character study. Looking forward to the next instalment.Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-76311302103937092492013-08-11T10:39:48.059-04:002013-08-11T10:39:48.059-04:00I know how she feels.... great snippet, and like o...I know how she feels.... great snippet, and like others have commented a terrific character portrait!Daezarkian13https://www.blogger.com/profile/08839083029518977312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-78482512957287563152013-08-11T10:04:41.670-04:002013-08-11T10:04:41.670-04:00An awesome post, Jess. You get right inside her *p...An awesome post, Jess. You get right inside her *personality*. That last line in particular hits the nail on the head.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-75629745049034805982013-08-11T09:55:36.979-04:002013-08-11T09:55:36.979-04:00I agree with the comment about the character devel...I agree with the comment about the character development. It's very realistic and I can feel for her wanting to be elsewhere. Nice 8, Jess.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-49166067330231038352013-08-11T09:43:25.279-04:002013-08-11T09:43:25.279-04:00Nice character development!! This is a good look i...Nice character development!! This is a good look into what makes her tick, Jess. Nice 8! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com