tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post4624898756164003778..comments2023-07-21T07:38:15.376-04:00Comments on Whimsical Quests of a Curious Mind: Six Sentence Sunday: A Near Miss part 2Jess Schirahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-19711820389594782012-05-10T21:42:13.894-04:002012-05-10T21:42:13.894-04:00This is a such a sweet story, Jess. Reminds of my...This is a such a sweet story, Jess. Reminds of my daughter's 4-H days. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-59815342484369401222012-05-09T14:45:16.530-04:002012-05-09T14:45:16.530-04:00*Sigh* This really evokes the emotions of young lo...*Sigh* This really evokes the emotions of young love and how every look and touch mean SO MUCH. Looking forward to reading more next Sunday. So nice to meet you through SSS!<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-85629611341893615012012-05-08T21:24:28.522-04:002012-05-08T21:24:28.522-04:00Such a cute six ... made me miss my pet pig! LOLSuch a cute six ... made me miss my pet pig! LOLAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17665026076003714782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-49957687758583306502012-05-07T20:08:15.823-04:002012-05-07T20:08:15.823-04:00Oh my gosh, you're so sweet. Thanks!Oh my gosh, you're so sweet. Thanks!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-34019776293210630522012-05-07T19:39:02.871-04:002012-05-07T19:39:02.871-04:00I was on the road all weekend visiting a friend, a...I was on the road all weekend visiting a friend, and was shocked to see all the great comments. Thank you so much.Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-89159137690596903972012-05-06T22:53:51.259-04:002012-05-06T22:53:51.259-04:00Cute! Will we see a kiss in the future? I really l...Cute! Will we see a kiss in the future? I really like these two already. Great job!Chantel Rhondeauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12796339007150166408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-56777007232274173762012-05-06T18:17:54.966-04:002012-05-06T18:17:54.966-04:00Very sweet. The UST in YA stories is very affectin...Very sweet. The UST in YA stories is very affecting.Elin Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09467512757347720397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-22980512199750871912012-05-06T18:05:08.691-04:002012-05-06T18:05:08.691-04:00Bless! Sounds like she should definitely kiss him ...Bless! Sounds like she should definitely kiss him next time.Karen de Langehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12976578068443326404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-15049907914621789422012-05-06T15:32:15.662-04:002012-05-06T15:32:15.662-04:00Oh, do I ever have a thing for calloused hands. *s...Oh, do I ever have a thing for calloused hands. *shivers* Love this, and love the piglets!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-73720108806672760682012-05-06T13:39:45.298-04:002012-05-06T13:39:45.298-04:00Captured this moment of embarrassment for her very...Captured this moment of embarrassment for her very well!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-63696311104560354272012-05-06T12:58:19.976-04:002012-05-06T12:58:19.976-04:00Love the atmosphere you weave here! Great job :)Love the atmosphere you weave here! Great job :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-20997905520648686102012-05-06T12:54:37.370-04:002012-05-06T12:54:37.370-04:00It's the start of a steamy love story. you'...It's the start of a steamy love story. you're words have a good pull Jess. Farmers/ranchers are rugged dudes and you show us that well.M.L. Falconerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14118491465472334192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-65905905267964915512012-05-06T12:46:42.904-04:002012-05-06T12:46:42.904-04:00I love stories with piglets in them!
Should this ...I love stories with piglets in them!<br /><br />Should this read "The solid feel of her weight against my heart doesn’t stop the way my stomach jumps around..."? The second "the" and the second "my" aren't there in the posted bit. <br /><br />Lovely six, Jess!Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-52705474471918721752012-05-06T12:23:55.055-04:002012-05-06T12:23:55.055-04:00"His callused skin scrapes against mine as I ..."His callused skin scrapes against mine as I let him tug me to my feet."<br /><br />I love that line because it conveys so much about your hero and it's a great contrast to the soft piglet tucked in her arm.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00320711269916905037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-40783928835349326712012-05-06T12:11:26.806-04:002012-05-06T12:11:26.806-04:00Love the sexual tension. Nice work. Very cool abou...Love the sexual tension. Nice work. Very cool about including pigs in your story. Love pigs! :-)Jolene Beauchamp, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09599044794239126940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-5173841035723298102012-05-06T11:26:57.619-04:002012-05-06T11:26:57.619-04:00Aw. Great last line. :)Aw. Great last line. :)patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-57736257210340926302012-05-06T10:36:07.506-04:002012-05-06T10:36:07.506-04:00Love the way she feels as she cuddles the piglet. ...Love the way she feels as she cuddles the piglet. Great six!Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-68931838073546159962012-05-06T09:05:34.595-04:002012-05-06T09:05:34.595-04:00These are by far the sweetest six I read all day t...These are by far the sweetest six I read all day today, Jess. I especially enjoyed the fifth sentence, piglet against jumping stomach - sounds like the anthem for romance. :) I like the suggestive hints quite a lot, I think they are perfect for YA!DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456386419847525258.post-10364075863443975762012-05-06T08:53:38.651-04:002012-05-06T08:53:38.651-04:00He sounds very kiss-worthy indeed. Next time she s...He sounds very kiss-worthy indeed. Next time she should skip that 'almost' part.Lisa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249215936412244450noreply@blogger.com