Oh look, it's Sunday again which means I get to post another excerpt from my YA manuscript, DWARFED. I'm still a little stunned by how well received last week's snippet was. You guys rock.
The first for parts of this scene can be found in my sidebar. Personally, I'm very proud of this scene. Any and all comments and criticisms are appreciated, and will be appreciated.
“That’s the runt.”The word causes a red curtain to cloud my vision and my intestines to twist into a tight knot. I’m caught between the impulse to attack him, and to race from this room and never speak to him again. “It looks fine to me.”
“That's because these are only a few hours old.”
“Why does its age matter?”